Six reads of the full 30-second script. Target length is 30s.
HookThe one customer who hated you is writing a review right now. The forty who loved you aren't.
WhyAngry people are motivated. Happy people are busy.
StakeThat's why your rating doesn't match your business.
SolutionSo stop hoping. This goes on your counter. They tap their phone, your review page opens. Three seconds. No app. Nothing to type.
MechanismTen reviews a month instead of one. So when that guy finally shows up, he's one drop in an ocean.
CTATap. Review. Done. dv8web.com
Smooth and trustworthy, middle-aged American. Lands closest to 30s with no trimming, and the restraint suits a hook that is already aggressive.
Laid-back and casual. Exactly 30s. Warmer and less polished than Eric, closer to how a shop owner actually talks.
Deep and resonant, tuned for social media. Most authority of the six, but risks sounding like a movie trailer.
Dominant and firm. Hits the hook hard. Slightly long, would need a small trim.
Charming and down-to-earth. Most likeable read, but 5.5s over. Would need real cutting or a faster setting.
Tagged for advertisement use, but reads noticeably older than our 40s on-camera talent. Also the longest by far.